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This SAT Writing videos goes over when to keep or ditch an extra sentence.

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Sometimes ya just gotta know whether to add a sentence to a paragraph or not. Watch this SAT Writing video to decided.


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Okay next up Best safety shmoop being writer people Here

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we go The writer's considering having phone sends a paragraph

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three They're everywhere there should the sense be added planners

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are also important as new communities require extensive development and

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infrastructure including housing roads sewer system parks and schools Well

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paragraph three claims that because urban or regional planners performed

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so many necessary services they usually don't have a hard

00:23

time finding and keeping employment and they don't make much

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money either So employers are incentivized of fire them anytime

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soon either Right adding another example of how they're needed

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definitely supports that claim We need it maybe might make

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the writing a little bit stronger unless we fell asleep

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reading We don't think paragraph three asked any questions so

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qet rid of that as established above This example supports

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paragraphs overall claim so it doesn't contradict it or anything

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And it's certainly relates to the topic So yeah he's

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probably the best answer here in a pretty boring question

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