How we cite our quotes: (Act.Scene.Line.)
Quote #7
PEDRINGANO:
Now, Pedringano, bid thy pistol hold,
And hold on, Fortune! Once more favor me;
Give but success to mine attempting spirit,
And let me shift for taking of mine aim.
Here is the gold, this is the gold proposed;
It is no dream that I adventure for,
But Pedringano is possessed thereof.
And he that would not strain his conscience
For him that this his liberal purse hath stretched,
Unworthy such a favor may he fail. (3.3.1-10)
This soliloquy occurs directly after the above speech by Lorenzo. As such, Pedringano's ambition to make money and rise in station is haunted by serious dramatic irony (we know he's going to die). Remember, money is not the end-all, be-all as far as social class goes in the 16th century. So, Pedringano's "attempting spirit" (or ambition) to "shift" (or move up the social ladder) by taking aim with his gun is misguided. After Pedringano gets paid, people like Lorenzo would still just see him as a pawn, albeit one with money.
But all of this is really a moot point since Pedringano is as good as dead when his job's done. His misguided assertion that "it is no dream' that he ventures for is perhaps the most ironic statement he makes—his ambitions are just a dream, and he's about to be rudely awakened. Does this make you feel sorry for him? Is he just a hardworking, ambitious guy looking to get ahead in a rigged system? Actually, no, he's still a murderous, opportunistic scumbag. And yet, he's still a pawn in a rigged system. Isn't complexity fun?
Quote #8
PAGE:
My master hath forbidden me to look in this box; and by my troth, 'tis likely, if he had not warned me, I should not have had so much idle time, for we men's-kind in our minority are like women in their uncertainty; that they are most forbidden, they will soonest attempt. So I now [he opens the box]. By my bare honesty, here's nothing but the bare empty box! (3.5.1-6).
Okay, let's start with this. Yeah, this thing is not like the others. Can you see why? Notice how the words aren't in neat little columns. Nope, they just keep going across the page like a regular old book. Sorry, we don't mean to patronize. But what you're noticing is that the page (or messenger) speaks in prose instead of verse. Prose is the way we speak in every day life, while verse has rhythm and meter—or rather, it's poetic. Typographers indicate verse by placing speeches in poetic columns, like stanzas.
So why did Kyd choose to make this speech prose rather than verse? Well, he did this because the page is of very low rank, and poetic speech is a class privilege. You'll see language as a class marker in a lot of Renaissance plays. And you might've also noticed that Pedringano speaks in rhyme a lot. That's because despite his rank he's one of the most pretentious snobs in the play. Keep an eye out for how characters speak in early plays and you'll learn a lot about their stations in life. And remember, poetry is classy.
Quote #9
LORENZO:
Why, then, rember'ing that old disgrace
Which you for Don Andrea had endured,
And now were likely longer to sustain,
By being found so meanly accompanied,
Thought rather—for I knew no readier mean—
To thrust Horatio forth my father's way. (3.10.54-59)
It's manipulation time. And here's the trick: Lorenzo has just freed Bel-Imperia from captivity just to let her know that he killed her boyfriend and threw her in jail for her own good. Wow thanks, brother. He reasons that she's been slumming with a low-class boy, and that he wanted to spare her the pain of enduring such a trial. And try as he might, he "knew no readier mean" than killing Horatio to make his dad happy.
Ah, now that makes sense. Well, not really. This is a crucial point in the play because it's the only place where Lorenzo ever gives motive to his actions. Does he really murder Horatio because he's not good enough for his sister? Hmmm, could be. But maybe you don't want to trust him because he's clearly being all excusey here.
The choice is yours. At stake is whether or not Lorenzo likes being bad for bad's sake, or his snobbery is so extreme that he has to kill. As you make your decision, keep in mind that if his sister marries Balthazar Lorenzo can't be king. He's likely next in line for the throne as things stand, but the child from the arranged marriage would be king. Would a real snob kill to not become king?