How we cite our quotes: (Line)
Quote #4
But there are no trees, no natural shelter. (11)
There's nowhere to hide. That's scary in itself: the storm can attack them without anything getting in the way. This is the second time Heaney's mentioned the lack of trees. Is this nervous repetition on behalf of the speaker, perhaps? The only protection these people have is their homes—here's hoping they're as "prepared" as they say they are in line 1.
Quote #5
The very windows, spits like a tame cat
Turned savage. We just sit tight while the wind dives (15-16)
Ever been inches from a wild cat as it spits and hisses at you? Us either, but think of just having to sit there and take it while sea spray spits at you like a wild animal. You might feel kind of helpless and afraid. These lines are even scarier because of how they're broken. At first it's all good in line 16—who cares about a little kitty cat spit?—but line 16 packs the punch. That break delays our fear response. It's like knowing the bad guy is going to pop out at you, but not being sure when.
Quote #6
And strafes invisibly. Space is a salvo,
We are bombarded with the empty air. (17-18)
Again, they just have to sit there while they feel as though they're being bombed by the wind. Heaney compares the storm to artillery fire. It's like being caught in a war with no weaponry to defend yourself. And check out what Heaney's doing with sibilance in line 17. All of those S sounds are practically like hissing—it makes us feel like we're being assaulted by the whizzing (figurative) artillery, and brings to mind that nasty, spitting ocean.