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Sorry then here's your shmoop du jour brought to you

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by animals lint brush not included Checking the falling fast

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said you need for a strict laws against animal cruelty

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Seemed before study shut A person intentionally hurt some family

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What a jerk Although animal voices peter it was like

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it's wrong All right what change should be made in

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sentence one And here the potential answers All right well

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what to do with a problem like sentence one Here

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we go Some people think that animal cruelty is not

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an important matter but in fact it should be taken

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very serious All right don't ask choice D yeah suggestions

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useless important and relevant mean basically the same thing in

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this end So there's no need to swap him Also

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replacing important with relevant would then make the article and

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incorrect Yeah that's relevant starts with a continent and would

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have to change to er and all right we've wasted

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enough time with you D let's build on option b

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isn't helpful either This sense needs its common because a

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conjunction but shows contrast and is connecting Two independent clauses

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deprive this sense of its comment and we'll have a

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run on sentence on our hands would only condemn the

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sentence to be in your run on if it had

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gotten on our bad side Answer C is correct about

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the word that not being totally necessary but mixing that

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isn't going to fix what's wrong with this sentence If

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we take a advice however will be all right Well

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i'll be all right with this sense of these Anyway

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Here's the deal serious is an adjective slap an l

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y ending on it and we've got ourselves an adverb

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Seriously why do we need an adverb Because here the

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word is modifying the verb taken well adjectives aren't a

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lot of modify verbs so seriously it is everyone's paying

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attention right This is serious so we need to take 00:01:55.108 --> [endTime] it

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