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This SAT Reading video goes over when (or when not) to add a sentence.


Transcript

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All right we're almost done two more Here we go

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The author is considering adding the following sense of the

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end of paragraph five show the sense be added if

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i'm thinking about having from nineteen twenty countries everything was

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clean restored varnish and re lined All right Well she

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added or not it's not really add much to it

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it's kind of like more granular detail about the care

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and feeding of a painting that worthy of this fine

00:21

piece of writing well to end the paragraph about paintings

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whereabouts in the eighteen hundreds with information about how the

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painting was preserved into the nineteenth and twentieth centuries maybe

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interesting Teo somebody get a different hobby but it deviates

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too far from the topic here Yeah stay relevant sends

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while it's true that sends follows the forward moving chronology

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of the paragraph There needs to be a good reason

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for adding information that goes beyond the timeline of our

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passage So get rid of a likewise Though the sentence

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does indeed jumped too far ahead in the chronology of

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events unexplained time travel is not its main problem here

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The very first sentence of the essay tells us that

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the painting still exist since it says the painting is

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in the capitol's rotunda Real issue here is relevance not 00:01:06.116 --> [endTime] time Sort of like politics

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